Date: Feb 16, 2009 - 11:59 pm Title: Chapter 5
Interesting story with an extremely twisted ending.
Well done--keep up the good work!
Date: Feb 16, 2009 - 11:49 pm Title: Chapter 4
Poor Hansel and Gretel, to not be able to be together due to the selfish witch.
Well done!
Date: Feb 16, 2009 - 11:43 pm Title: Chapter 3
Very sexy--I love it!
Well done--keep up the good work!
Date: Feb 16, 2009 - 11:34 pm Title: Chapter 2
Yummy!
Date: Feb 16, 2009 - 11:26 pm Title: Chapter 1
Lucky girl to discover that he is NOT her brother after all and that they can pursue a sexual relationship.
Great first chapter!
Date: Jun 26, 2008 - 01:18 pm Title: Chapter 1
This was a heck of a fractured fairy tale! I enjoyed your imagry and the character changes/growth throughout the story.