Reviews For Morning Wood
Reviewer: Viper16 Signed 
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Date: Jan 25, 2009 - 02:41 pm Title: Morning Wood
[Report This]Date: Jan 25, 2009 - 02:41 pm Title: Morning Wood
You have a way of melding David's spoken conversation with his unspoken thought that makes the reader laugh yet stay focused on the plot as it unfolds. Just one question on thisSentence: "She kisses me roughly and bit my lower lip." Shouldn't it read: She kissed me roughly and bit my lower lip.
Enjoyed the story J.P. Bederwehl
Oh does that translate to "Bed Her Well"
chuckles.
Reviewer: Saguaro Signed [Report This]
Date: Jan 20, 2009 - 08:50 pm Title: Morning Wood
[Report This]Date: Jan 20, 2009 - 08:50 pm Title: Morning Wood
Very nice story J. I was a little disappointed reading because nothing clicked, but you summed everything up properly. Well done.