Penname: Saguaro [Contact] Real name: mamma
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Reviews by Saguaro
Mine by DTM Rated: 2 - Provocative [Reviews - 1]
Summary: Mine!
Categories: The Attic > The Gentleman Dominant > Poetry > The Ecstasy
Characters: None
Content Notes: None
Contest Entry: None
Genres: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 36 Read Count: 19
[Report This] Published: Apr 11, 2008 Updated: Apr 11, 2008
Reviewer: Saguaro Signed
Date: Nov 05, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Nice Bro

Summary: Past Featured StoryAfter a chance overheard conversation one day in the staff canteen, Samantha is approached and offered the opportunity to vastly increase her meager salary by becoming the Corporate Entertainment Manager for the company where she works.

Samantha is tempted by the offer and takes on the role with her usual enthusiasm providing in house sexual services for the directors and management of a large multi national company.
Categories: The Library > Consenting Partners
Characters: None
Content Notes: Multiple partners
Contest Entry: None
Genres: None
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 35682 Read Count: 1990
[Report This] Published: May 03, 2008 Updated: May 16, 2008
Reviewer: Saguaro Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: Aug 04, 2008 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8The Orental Connection

Great story, easy read the chapters flowed wonderfully, and no detail was left out.

I'd love to read what Samantha does after this.

Putting the ghosts to bed by pdabber Rated: 3 - Risqué starstarstar [Reviews - 1]
Summary: The fingers that stroked my sides began to tremble,her eyelids began to flutter."This is magical."she whispered,as her sweaty body went into convulsions."Ohh my...Whew..I'm gonna want this a lot!"
Categories: The Library > Consenting Partners
Characters: None
Content Notes: Bisexuality
Contest Entry: None
Genres: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 17272 Read Count: 135
[Report This] Published: May 19, 2008 Updated: May 20, 2008
Reviewer: Saguaro Signed starstarstar
Date: Nov 09, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: arriving at the front door

Great story, a very interesting read. I enjoyed it.

There's some formatting and typos though that distract from the story itself.

Valerie by dweaver999 Rated: 4 - Wanton starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2]
Summary: Valerie Burbon is a top ad executive who regularly puts in 60 hour weeks and relaxes her tensions by a really good weekend fuck. This weekend, she encounters Charles Vanquil, who introduces her to the sensuous and frightening world of domination and submission. Soon, she is descending deeper and deeper into this lifestyle, finding her submissive nature by submitting to Charles and the rest of his submissives. But will this life destroy her, or is the willing submissive, open to total control by a strong Master or Mistress, the person she was meant to be?
Categories: The Attic > Due
Characters: None
Content Notes: Anal sex, BDSM, Bisexuality, Blood Play (Non-Vamp, menstrual, knife play etc), Bondage, Dominance/submission, Exhibitionism, Foul Language, Group, Handjob/Fingering, Heterosexual, Humiliation, Masturbation, Multiple partners, Oral sex, Romance, S&M, Sexual toys, Spanking, Violence - Story contains violence/blood/gore/etc.
Contest Entry: None
Genres: None
Series: Valerie and her friends
Chapters: 19 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 194754 Read Count: 1898
[Report This] Published: May 24, 2008 Updated: May 24, 2008
Reviewer: Saguaro Signed
Date: Dec 19, 2008 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 10B: Rebirth of Hope (continued)

Another wonderful story. Incredulous though that a complete novice would subject and be subjected to such intense scenes so soon. Makes me glad that I waded in. I'm a wuss lol.

Heartless by SweetWitch Rated: 3 - Risqué starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3]
Summary: Past Featured StorySome women are born to love, others have love thrust upon them.
Categories: The Bedroom > Stories
Characters: None
Content Notes: Romance
Contest Entry: None
Genres: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 12276 Read Count: 244
[Report This] Published: Jun 01, 2008 Updated: Jun 01, 2008
Reviewer: Saguaro Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: Jun 29, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Heartless

What a wonderful story!! I could feel the anguish of Amelia, her resolve, her determination not to let someone in.

When her walls finally caved in, I was genuinely happy for both characters.

Please keep writing. I've enjoyed this very much.

Surrender by Tamin Rated: 4 - Wanton [Reviews - 1]
Summary: A donor's surrender to her Vamp.
Categories: The Library > More than Human
Characters: None
Content Notes: Vamp - Vampire
Contest Entry: None
Genres: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 577 Read Count: 33
[Report This] Published: Jun 02, 2008 Updated: Jun 02, 2008
Reviewer: Saguaro Signed
Date: Dec 07, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Surrender

Great start. Personally I have trouble with a character or person talking about him or herself in the third person. It's distracting and takes away from the feelings of that character. But that's just me.

A Vision by Wystan Ephraim Rated: 3 - Risqué starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 1]
Summary: Maybe it is a ghost story, though one I hope does not chill, but rather heats, your blood.
Categories: The Attic > The Gentleman Dominant > Stories
Characters: None
Content Notes: None
Contest Entry: None
Genres: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 4270 Read Count: 92
[Report This] Published: Jun 08, 2008 Updated: Sep 15, 2008
Reviewer: Saguaro Signed
Date: Sep 16, 2008 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Very nice, will you be posting more?

Galactic Slave by dweaver999 Rated: 4 - Wanton starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 2]
Summary: Susan Melnin is a successful trade negotiator for a major interstellar trade conglomerate. A trusted coworker enslaves her under the laws of an alien planet, and she begins an odyssey of danger, intrigue and sex that will change her forever. Purchased by the mysterious Brusjin Valenshenko, she becomes entangled in a secret war that had been fought in the Galactic Federation for over 500 years. What is her Master’s mission and why does it take him to the primitive outlands of the galaxy? Can a woman used to being in command of herself and those around her find safety, fulfillment and love as the lowest of all slaves, the natural slave?
Categories: The Library > Another Reality
Characters: None
Content Notes: Anal sex, Anthropomorphic/Furry, Bisexuality, Bondage, DP, Female/Female - Yuri, Group, Heterosexual, Masturbation, Ménage à trois, Multiple partners, NON-CON - Non-Consensual, forced sex or rape, Oral sex, S&M, Sci-Fi/Fantasy, Violence - Story contains violence/blood/gore/etc., Xenophilia (Sex with Aliens)
Contest Entry: None
Genres: None
Series: Hellfire Trilogy
Chapters: 12 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 55995 Read Count: 1153
[Report This] Published: Jun 13, 2008 Updated: Jun 13, 2008
Reviewer: Saguaro Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Feb 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12: Freedom

What another wonderful tale you've woven. The imagery and detail you told gave just enough to envision the aliens and what she experienced. What an imagination you have. I'm envious of your abilities... now... on to the sequel.

Making Love by Doctor Flotsom Rated: 3 - Risqué starstarstarstar [Reviews - 1]
Summary: Remembering waking and making love in the middle of the night.
Categories: The Bedroom > Stories
Characters: None
Content Notes: Heterosexual, PWP – Plot, what plot?, Romance, Romance
Contest Entry: None
Genres: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 560 Read Count: 75
[Report This] Published: Jun 23, 2008 Updated: Jun 23, 2008
Reviewer: Saguaro Signed starstarstarstar
Date: Jun 29, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I love when loving someone becomes this natural and easy... great story! Wished it would have been a bit longer (I'm a secret voyuer.

All Things To All People by dweaver999 Rated: 4 - Wanton starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 4]
Summary: Past Featured StoryCynthia Halverston is a doctoral student trying to perfect a fertility drug that does not result in multiple births.  A lab accident transforms her into a sexual dynamo who is forced by her very body to become the sexual plaything for every man she encounters.  Responding to pressures she does not understand, she throws herself at every man she encounters, giving him the sexual desires locked deep in his soul.  Can she find a cure before her ability to distinguish between what she wants and what those around her want is totally destroyed?  Or will she forever be all things to all people?
Categories: The Library > Consenting Partners, The Library > More than a Couple
Characters: None
Content Notes: Anal sex, BDSM, Bisexuality, Body modification, Bondage, DP, Drama, Female/Female - Yuri, Fetish, Fisting, Group, Heterosexual, Infidelity, Ménage à trois, Mind Control/Hypnosis, Multiple partners, NON-CON - Non-Consensual, forced sex or rape, Oral sex, Romance, Violence - Story contains violence/blood/gore/etc., Wet Dream
Contest Entry: None
Genres: None
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 55886 Read Count: 1214
[Report This] Published: Jun 26, 2008 Updated: Jun 26, 2008
Reviewer: Saguaro Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star
Date: Jun 29, 2008 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: Kill of Cure

What a wonderful story. I couldn't put it down. I would have loved to read how the two of them make and adapt to the transition. Will you be writing more of these two?

Author's Response:

I haven't any plans to do more with these characters, but if there's enough interest, I would think about it.  Honestly, I didn't think anyone would be interested.

 

Summary: Strange things are happening in South Cape. The council leaders are disappearing one by one. But for what reason? And just who is behind it. It's up to Tom Ballentine and his new employer to find out.
Categories: The Library > Another Reality
Characters: None
Content Notes: Action/Adventure, Alternate Universe/Reality, Drama, Foul Language, Lycanthrope (werewolf, werecat etc), Sci-Fi/Fantasy, Vamp - Vampire
Contest Entry: None
Genres: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 17568 Read Count: 35
[Report This] Published: Jul 23, 2008 Updated: Jul 23, 2008
Reviewer: Saguaro Signed
Date: Jul 27, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Part One

This gets better every time I read it. I can't wait to see what you're doing with the full length version.

Island Slave by dweaver999 Rated: 4 - Wanton starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 5]
Summary: Carla Baxter is lonely.  Unlike her friend Sherry, she can't enjoy sex for its own sake.  Carla must have connection, an emotional tie to the man she sleeps with.  Her life has been a long string of sameness that she decides to change.  For her vacation, she goes on an exotic cruise, something she would never have considered in the past.  She falls for an islander, Quinn Sanchez, and soon finds herself his prisoner, kept naked in his mansion.  But Quinn has a dark secret, a pain from his past that will destroy both of them unless Carla can learn who hurt him and bring healing to the man she is starting to love being the slave of.  Can love flourish when it starts with unwillingness and is watered with pain?
Categories: The Attic > The Gentleman Dominant > Stories
Characters: None
Content Notes: Anal sex, BDSM, Bondage, Dominance/submission, Drama, Heterosexual, Humiliation, Hurt/Comfort, NON-CON - Non-Consensual, forced sex or rape, Oral sex, Romance, S&M, Spanking, Wet Dream
Contest Entry: None
Genres: None
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 64169 Read Count: 1091
[Report This] Published: Jul 24, 2008 Updated: Aug 02, 2008
Reviewer: Saguaro Signed starstarstarstarstar
Date: Jul 27, 2008 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: The Fateful Cruise (continued)

Another wonderful story!!! So beautifully written. I don't think you left a single detail out. Of course, though, you leave the reader wanting more... again. No fair.

The Wager by dawn Rated: 3 - Risqué [Reviews - 6]
Summary: A reckless bet on a game of darts is the start of an intense evening when a Dominant and submissive meet face to face for the first time.
Categories: The Attic > The Gentleman Dominant > Stories
Characters: None
Content Notes: BDSM
Contest Entry: None
Genres: None
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 14232 Read Count: 1087
[Report This] Published: Jul 26, 2008 Updated: Aug 12, 2008
Reviewer: Saguaro Signed
Date: Jul 26, 2008 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

Wonderfully written, I could feel her anticipation, aprehension, and excitement. Will there be more?

Author's Response: thank you kindly lady *s* you made me brave enough to post the rest.

Mine by TheGreyKnight Rated: 2 - Provocative starstarhalf-star [Reviews - 2]
Summary: One night of taking you.
Categories: The Attic > The Gentleman Dominant > Stories
Characters: None
Content Notes: BDSM, Breath Play, Dubious Consent
Contest Entry: None
Genres: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 2807 Read Count: 132
[Report This] Published: Aug 10, 2008 Updated: Aug 10, 2008
Reviewer: Saguaro Signed
Date: Aug 14, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Nice read. I thought that's what she was requested to say.

When I Make You Cum by scribbler Rated: 2 - Provocative starstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 2]
Summary: Past Featured StoryA man gets an unexpected welcome home.
Categories: The Bedroom > Stories
Characters: None
Content Notes: Heterosexual, Oral sex
Contest Entry: None
Genres: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: No Word count: 526 Read Count: 41
[Report This] Published: Aug 28, 2008 Updated: Aug 28, 2008
Reviewer: Saguaro Signed starstarstar
Date: Jun 24, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I too enjoyed this, you captured the act beautifully.

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