Penname: Saguaro [Contact] Real name: mamma
Member Since: Sep 29, 2007
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Galactic Slut by dweaver999 Rated: 4 - Wanton [Reviews - 12]
Summary:

Susan Brusjin Valenshenko have been bringing slave worlds into the Federation for over a year now, exposing these worlds to the freedoms that will cause them to shed their slaving ways.  Using her body and her sexual prowess to accomplish this important task, Susan is having the time of her life.  Everything changes, however, when a potential new member of the Federation is found to have five working progenitor artifacts.  Left over from the species that is believed to have seeded all life in the galaxy, the hellfire group will stop at nothing to gain control of these devices; even killing Susan when she stands in their way.  They forget one thing though; Susan has an ally, the voratex crystal they attempted to enslave her with.  Crystals have long memories and this one doesn't like being used to enslave other creatures...

 


Categories: The Bedroom > Stories, The Library > More than a Couple, The Library > More than Human, The Library > Another Reality
Characters: None
Content Notes: Action/Adventure, Alternate Universe/Reality, Anal sex, Angst - Torment, anguish, Bisexuality, Body modification, Bondage, Drama, Group, Multiple partners, Oral sex, Sci-Fi/Fantasy, Violence - Story contains violence/blood/gore/etc.
Contest Entry: None
Genres: None
Series: Hellfire Trilogy
Chapters: 11 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 50355 Read Count: 850
[Report This] Published: Feb 09, 2009 Updated: Mar 03, 2009
Reviewer: Saguaro Signed
Date: Feb 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Death of a Slave

more please?

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Date: Feb 14, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Abolitionists and Relics

ok, I'm ready for the next one...

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Date: Feb 22, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: The map of the Heavens

more please... more

Reviewer: Saguaro Signed
Date: Feb 25, 2009 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: Cultural Divide

yet another wonderful chapter to make me want for more...

Reviewer: Saguaro Signed
Date: Mar 10, 2009 Title: Chapter 11: Epilogue

*applauds* So nicely done (as usual). I'm not happy about having to wait until late 09 though...*grins*

Death of a Master by dweaver999 Rated: 4 - Wanton starstarstarstar [Reviews - 6]
Summary:

Death leaves a hole in all of us, a pain that never goes away. What happens, however, when a Master dies, leaving his slaves bereft of his control and guidance. Valerie Burbon and her friends come face to face with such trauma when death interupts the normal flow of their lives. How will the contend with the loss and pain that come? How will the slave herself, alone for the first time in years, deal with her unintended freedom? The death of a Master will touch all their lives.

 


Categories: The Bedroom > Stories, The Library > Consenting Partners, The Library > More than a Couple, The Attic > Due
Characters: None
Content Notes: Angst - Torment, anguish, BDSM, Bisexuality, Bondage, Character Death, Dominance/submission, DP, Drama, Exhibitionism, Female/Female - Yuri, Fetish, Group, Handjob/Fingering, Heterosexual, Humiliation, Masturbation, Ménage à trois, Multiple partners, Oral sex, Romance, S&M, Sexual toys, Spanking
Contest Entry: None
Genres: BDSM, Drama
Series: Valerie and her friends
Chapters: 14 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 129823 Read Count: 545
[Report This] Published: Mar 14, 2009 Updated: Mar 04, 2011
Reviewer: Saguaro Signed
Date: Mar 30, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1b: Opportunity Knocks (continued)

Another great chapter. I have to say, I'm delighted that the submissive women aren't bursting into tears at the drop of a hat.

Reviewer: Saguaro Signed
Date: Apr 12, 2009 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2: Return to the Fold

great chapter. I'm anxious to read about the pony play. Now your previous questions make sense.

Reviewer: Saguaro Signed
Date: Jun 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3A: Pony Girls

very well done. I like the depth of the dialog, and your description is flawless

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Date: Jun 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 3B: Pony Girls (continued)

It would be nice to get into the mind of Charles a bit. I'm anxious to see how it all ties together.

Reviewer: Saguaro Signed starstarstarstar
Date: Sep 10, 2009 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 4B: Calm Before the Storm (continued)

I loved the chapter, errors and all. If you need a beta reader in the interim, I'd be happy to help.

Forrest Princess by Lover Rated: 4 - Wanton [Reviews - 2]
Summary: Even in the wilderness miracles happen.
Categories: The Bedroom > Stories
Characters: None
Content Notes: Masturbation
Contest Entry: None
Genres: Romance
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 10846 Read Count: 90
[Report This] Published: Apr 06, 2009 Updated: Apr 06, 2009
Reviewer: Saguaro Signed
Date: Apr 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Forrest Princess

Nice story I enjoyed it.

Whip It Good by dweaver999 Rated: 3 - Risqué starstarstarstar [Reviews - 1]
Summary:

Angela takes her anger out on a delighted Surmi.

 


Categories: The Attic > The Lady Dominant > Stories
Characters: None
Content Notes: BDSM, Blood Play (Non-Vamp, menstrual, knife play etc), Bondage, S&M
Contest Entry: None
Genres: BDSM
Series: Valerie and her friends
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1828 Read Count: 58
[Report This] Published: Apr 19, 2009 Updated: Apr 19, 2009
Reviewer: Saguaro Signed starstarstarstar
Date: Jul 23, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: Whip It Good

Nice diversion from the block. I understand it completely. It is nice though to have these side stories, makes the entire story so much more rounded.

What We Keep in Dark Closets by Raven Tiger Rated: 2 - Provocative starstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 1]
Summary: Past Featured Story

I will never forget that moment as long as I will live. The first time I realized who I truly am, and my first denial. One-shot.


Categories: The Salon
Characters: None
Content Notes: Angst - Torment, anguish, Challenge - Story written in response to a challenge, Complete, Drama, Fantasy, Female/Female - Yuri, Foul Language, Heterosexual, Unresolved Sexual Tension, Voyeurism
Contest Entry: None
Genres: Angst, Challenge, Dark, Drama, Ficlet, Same Sex
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 1342 Read Count: 38
[Report This] Published: Apr 23, 2009 Updated: Apr 23, 2009
Reviewer: Saguaro Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: Apr 26, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: What We Keep in Dark Closets

I enjoyed this, and even though this was a challenge response, would enjoy reading further.

As a former geeky frosh, please continue *grins*

Author's Response: Thanks Sagurao. I'm really glad you enjoyed the read. I might take this further to see what Charlotte's story is. If I do I'll let you know if you want. -smiles-

The Reward by mjbarbag Rated: 3 - Risqué starstarstarstar [Reviews - 3]
Summary: Professor Sydney Hawthorn is given a gift by her husband of a spa weekend.   Given the right circumstances the Good Professor finds just how exciting a nice gift can be.
Categories: The Bedroom > Stories
Characters: None
Content Notes: Fantasy, Heterosexual, Romance, Sci-Fi/Fantasy, Unresolved Sexual Tension, Wet Dream
Contest Entry: None
Genres: General, Romance
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Table of Contents
Completed: Yes Word count: 8859 Read Count: 97
[Report This] Published: Jun 24, 2009 Updated: Jun 24, 2009
Reviewer: Saguaro Signed starstarstarstar
Date: Jun 24, 2009 Title: Chapter 1: The Young Lovers

Most wonderful beginning. You tell a beautiful story. I almost felt Yuri's hands on me during the massage. I'm anxious to read more.

Reviewer: Saguaro Signed starstarstarhalf-star
Date: Jun 24, 2009 Title: Chapter 2: The Dancer

Another excellent chapter. Your description and imagery is fabulous.

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