Date: 06/04/2013 12:26 am Title: Chapter 3
I love the way this one has begun! What an interesting start!
Date: 08/25/2009 05:34 am Title: Chapter 22
A very good story Corazon.
Date: 08/25/2009 04:49 am Title: Chapter 14
That catnip story always makes me crack up. I LOVED it.
Date: 06/28/2009 11:27 pm Title: Chapter 22
"Hermione is pregnant with Snape's child. My sister is dating a Malfoy. Where the hell was I when all this was happening?" All Ron xD
I like that kid has his nose- most of authors don't want to do this ;) Your last lines were great. All in all- 5/6. One point is out because in some moments Snape was acting like love-struck fool.
Two things are bothering me (or I just missed/don't understand properly it?)- about Minerva and Cissy and Minerva and Albus. What Minerva owe Cissy? and what happened to the child of Minerva and Albus?
Date: 06/28/2009 11:11 pm Title: Chapter 21
God bless you!!! I don't like fanfics where he proposes on knee with huge diamont ring. That's tottaly not like him! "but "damn, why did it have to be Potter?" that was best line in this chapter :D
Date: 06/28/2009 10:38 pm Title: Chapter 16
I always like Ginny/Draco :) And, dare I say, Remus and Cissy? xD Your love scene is ok, but after almoust all yours stories I see that you have some kind of order. Kiss->clothes->breasts->fingers->oral->her orgasm->entrance->both have orgasm, usually he make her come first with playing with her clitoris. It's ok for each story, but when someone is reading all stories it's getting kind of boring. Sorry for harsh words!
Date: 06/28/2009 10:23 pm Title: Chapter 15
Harry is a snake! xD That'll make Snape's world upside down xD Scene in dream- nice, but Snape sometimes think too much.
Date: 06/28/2009 09:47 pm Title: Chapter 11
O Gods... I was laughing so loud that I awake my family xD "but being only two inches high, his revenge
would have to wait" -> that was great! And poor Sevvie xD
Date: 06/28/2009 09:16 pm Title: Chapter 7
BLOODY BRILLIANT!!! His last sentence was just brilliant! xD Fred and George would never stood up after this :D
Date: 06/28/2009 09:06 pm Title: Chapter 6
Hmmm... This dreams are too sweet and too high-tone. But his feelings are good!
Date: 06/28/2009 08:56 pm Title: Chapter 5
Uff... That was not so bad as I was afraid. I know- there'll be more. But that was good chapter.
Date: 06/28/2009 08:48 pm Title: Chapter 4
Oh God... That's totally unexpected! I was sure that they'll be together in conspiration for longer! Great :)
Date: 06/28/2009 08:39 pm Title: Chapter 3
Ohoho... I like that one. No jumping to bed in first two lines xD Really good :)
[Report This]Date: 08/22/2008 06:53 pm Title: Chapter 22
This was a wonderful story! I enjoyed every minute of reading it. Excellent job!!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much!!! This was one of my favorite stories to write!
Hugs,
Corazon
Date: 11/01/2007 10:18 pm Title: Chapter 18
The good news is that I am really enjoying the story.
The bad news is that you have just acquired, unbidden, an obsessive Brit-picker.
The phrase 'knocking up' has a different meaning in the British Isles:
It would simply indicate that he knocked on her door to wake her up.
Hermione would almost certainly be aware of the American meaning of the phrase through her voracious (and apparently omnivorous) reading, but I somehow doubt that Severus, even if aware, would speak it. He just might say 'left her up the duff'
Author's Response: Where were you when I wrote all these stories? I really could have used a Brit-picker when I was writing. I do appreciate your reviews and that you enjoy my stories. Any other pointers you have, I will gladly hear them out.
Happy Reading!!!
Corazon
[Report This]Date: 07/28/2007 03:38 am Title: Chapter 22
IT'S GREAT! FANTASTIC!
[Report This]Date: 07/18/2007 08:13 pm Title: Chapter 22
excellent story!bravo
[Report This]Date: 07/12/2007 03:17 pm Title: Chapter 22
great story. thanks
[Report This]Date: 02/11/2007 11:06 pm Title: Chapter 22
Well, this was just charming! The dynamic between Hermione and Snape was well done! I loved the scene where Snape faints at sight of Harry's animagus! And, the labor scene was priceless..."Yes, dear." Hahahahahahaha! Hilarious!
I only noticed a few grammar errors...this coming from the queen of said errors. (My stories are at fanfiction.net. I think I've read some of your work there before??) Your dialogue was good, flowing well.
I really liked your portrayal of Snape. I see him feeling very insecure about a love relationship. I, too, believe his acidic attitude to be a wall he uses to protect himself, in large part, though I also sense he comes by it somewhat naturally, as well. A person like him would fall pretty hard once love found him. I think that very accurate writing.
All in all, a great story. I am so glad I found it, and I will read more of your work with great anticipation.
Blessings,
Elizabeth
Author's Response: Thank you so much! Yes, I am sure I have grammatical errors because I am also queen of errors...hehehehe...but I am very pleased you enjoyed my story and the way I wrote Snape. I hope you enjoy my other writings.
Happy Reading!
Hugs,
Corazon
Date: 11/07/2006 02:14 am Title: Chapter 22
Ah the end. :) A nice sweet ending.
AND you seem to be having some similar ideas to mine. [I won't say which]
Date: 11/07/2006 01:59 am Title: Chapter 21
Aw uncertain Severus. :)
Date: 11/07/2006 01:50 am Title: Chapter 20
Love Minerva's outburst.
Date: 11/07/2006 01:45 am Title: Chapter 19
Grr stupid parents! They should be cool like my parents! :D
Date: 11/06/2006 12:39 am Title: Chapter 18
Ohh sticky situations!