



[Report This]Date: Jul 28, 2008 - 01:59 pm Title: Chapter 1
*grins* I have to admit that I was really concerned there that this poor cop thought he was going to be seeing a minor. What a wonderful twist you gave to it all!
Date: Jun 12, 2008 - 03:37 pm Title: Chapter 1
Oh wow what a game...The poor policeman though..All excited and no relief.
Loved it
Date: Jun 05, 2008 - 07:52 am Title: Chapter 1
Thank you for your review, I am always amazed how well this story is recieved it is such a simple story but when I submitted it to another story site it quickly jumped very high in their listing, again I thank you.
Laura



[Report This]Date: Jun 05, 2008 - 12:48 am Title: Chapter 1
Beautiful story - I particularly like the use of the third person and the description of her breasts swaying with each stroke.
I wait patiently to learn of their next adventure!