Date: Aug 16, 2008 - 09:16 am Title: Chapter 1
Your story is one erotic ball of energy. It stirs plenty of visual delight, of that I'm sure. I can definitely feel bits of reality woven into this fantasy. Well written, sweetie! xoxoxo
Author's Response: *s* Thank you my dear One for taking the time to read and for your words here. xoxoxo
Date: Aug 12, 2008 - 07:13 pm Title: Chapter 11
Oh my! That was intense.
Thanks for an enjoyable story.
Author's Response: *nods* it was intense to write. i'm glad you enjoyed it and i appreciate your taking the time to let me know. Thank you!
Date: Jul 29, 2008 - 08:16 pm Title: Chapter 7
Oh (fanning as she speaks) my!
Author's Response: thank you kindly for your encouraging words *s*
Date: Jul 28, 2008 - 02:29 pm Title: Chapter 6
I'm so glad that you reposted this! Welcome back.
Author's Response: thank You for Your lovely words in 360 and for inviting me back. *s*
Date: Jul 26, 2008 - 06:01 pm Title: Chapter 4
Come back soon.
Date: Jul 26, 2008 - 03:47 pm Title: Chapter 4
Wonderfully written, I could feel her anticipation, aprehension, and excitement. Will there be more?
Author's Response: thank you kindly lady *s* you made me brave enough to post the rest.