



[Report This]Date: Sep 17, 2008 - 02:30 am Title: Chapter 5: Connie
Awesome end to another fabulous story. I like how you not only summed it up but put in the twist.
I can't help but wonder if there's something more in this for Spike.
Date: Sep 17, 2008 - 02:08 am Title: Chapter 4: Steven
Ok, now you just are making me go to the next chapter.... great story... again. *smiles*
Date: Sep 17, 2008 - 01:55 am Title: Chapter 3: Kendra
The blindfold seemed to just disappear in the first round, which for me made me do a read over.
I enjoyed how you fueled her with this need, melded it deep in her psyche.



[Report This]Date: Sep 17, 2008 - 12:14 am Title: Chapter 2: Melanie
Another great read!!! Anxious to get to more chapters.




[Report This]Date: Aug 30, 2008 - 06:03 pm Title: Chapter 1: Jack
Great twist to the VR. Well done.