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Date: Jul 06, 2009 - 12:45 am Title: Chapter 1

I liked it. Your writing was pretty good. Your descriptions were just a bit garish but I know some people like it that way. One thing that I do have to point out though is that using the word ooze when talking about sex makes me think of open sores and is not the least bit sexy. Other than that it was a pretty good one shot.

Author's Response: Thank you! It is good to know mission accomplished. I had never thought of the word ooze that way, and now that I think of it...you're correct.rnrnGarish -- you mean overdone...little too much detail? I love detail...a weakness. rnrnGrant.

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