Date: May 22, 2011 - 10:53 am Title: Chapter 1
That was a nice story. I enjoyed reading it. The only part I did not like was about the busts. It produced a somewhat incongrous image and was something of a turn off (why would anyone wish to have sex in a room containing the bust of the second one?). Other than this, the story was very pleasant and I look forward to reading more about your Ivy's adventures.
PS I particularly liked your game with the words in Mr. Coldbloods name. It was most fitting