Date: May 01, 2008 - 03:33 am Title: Only in the Dark
Wow. Nice. I wish I could say something intelligent here other than that I really, really liked this. But I can't. Sorry. Very very good.
Author's Response: Hey, you used full words and sentences, that's intelligent enough in this day and age. Thank you for the support and kindness. I'm very happy you enjoyed this story from my darker side. Thank you very much for your time.
Date: Apr 25, 2008 - 11:36 am Title: Only in the Dark
This was rather beautifully written. The sense of longing and unfulfilled dreams makes this short rather melancholy. Nice Job!
Author's Response: Thank you so much. I'm very pleased that you enjoyed it. It was one of my favorite pieces to do, because it was the darkest I ever dared go. I really appreciate the time you gave to me to comment.
Date: Apr 25, 2008 - 03:42 am Title: Only in the Dark
Nice work; his torment really comes through. I've felt like that a time or two!
Author's Response: Thank you very much for the feedback. For one of my older works I'm pretty proud of how that one turned out. Your comment is very much appreciated.